TatyAlexx

I have posted the first chapter of the book I have been working on the name of the story is Destined and I would lie for you guys to check it out and give me back some feed back.

CASPARITA

Sounds good :D
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TatyAlexx

@Casparita Thank you for your feedback. I plan to update and edit the story when I get a new computer.
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CASPARITA

@TsymometheStrawberry I have read the two chapter of your book. My views- 
          	  Although the plot hasnt developed yet, I can tell that it is an interesting story. The only problem I saw was that there were quite a few grammatical errors. Just fix that, and you'll be working your way to glory. Please do update! :))
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TatyAlexx

I have posted the first chapter of the book I have been working on the name of the story is Destined and I would lie for you guys to check it out and give me back some feed back.

CASPARITA

Sounds good :D
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TatyAlexx

@Casparita Thank you for your feedback. I plan to update and edit the story when I get a new computer.
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CASPARITA

@TsymometheStrawberry I have read the two chapter of your book. My views- 
            Although the plot hasnt developed yet, I can tell that it is an interesting story. The only problem I saw was that there were quite a few grammatical errors. Just fix that, and you'll be working your way to glory. Please do update! :))
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