Cynarr
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just dropping by to ask how you're doing? ♡ it's been a while since we talked ♡
TaurielWolf21
@Cynarr PS. I know it's not even that much to actually review. lol. I think I was just really excited last night, and had to share with someone! Anyway, how are you? How's your own writing coming?
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TaurielWolf21
@Cynarr Hi! I need the honest and unbiased opinion of someone *outside* of my family and friends. haha. After more brain dumping, and trying to figure out a plot....I'm working on chapter 6!! Anyway. You're a brilliant writer, and one who knows how to go about it. So. I was wondering if you'd give me your honest opinion of my first opening paragraph for the prologue?? It's a rough draft, mind you, so yes, I'm sure it still needs tweaking! Thank you so much in advance!! "That day had begun just as any other day had before. The same milkman whistling down the lane, the same paperboy cycling down the driveway, and the same neighbor’s dog barking at him against the cold metal fence. A shaft of warm sunlight pierced the window's glass and Kathryn Fairchilde woke to a dawn that splashed blood red across the sky." (My brain decided to make it to where Tauriel is actually from earth first, something happens and Aslan sends her to Middle Earth, before Narnia in the end. I know. Far-fetched...but that's the first draft idea anyway. LOL)
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