Taurothemonk

Edcruz4542

Hi

Graveyard-the-dragon

I like your writing, but you need to add quotations when the characters talking an have different lines when a new person starts to talk.

Taurothemonk

 What story did u get that from?
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Taurothemonk

I just like to keep things smooth ill make changes to the story.
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