Andy07533

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The FF “Room Sixty Nine”.. sorry, but it’s so shit. Like I don’t get what you even wrote. The English is so terrible. I can’t read what you’re trying to say… you didn’t even separate the sentences spoken by the people from the action that was happening.. like that, you just improve your English first.. because what you wrote is absolute shit. When I started reading it, I thought it was good at first, but then the English pissed the fuck out of me. Don’t write FFs if you don’t know how to.