45anna88

Hey could please check out my book and give me suggestion

45anna88

I'll surely edit it once I end the story and I'll think about the title . If you have any other suggestions do tell me
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TaylorFer

@45anna88 it's a good story so far. I like it. A suggestion though is to get an editor or edit it all once you finish the story. Also, I think you should make the title lowercase instead of all caps. Something like 'Not the First Choice!'. But that's just my opinion. You can do whatever you'd like. :)
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