Wow! I have like so many questions!
First of all, you are very pretty :) I assume the girl in your story is you..? If it's not then well.. this is awk.
Second, you have an incredible talent for writing. I completely fell in love with the first chapter of your story, and maybe hopefully (when my schedule clears out) I would be able to read lots more!
Don't ever give up, no matter how hard or difficult things may seem:) <3