LadyOfTheNight

hey there...amy asked me to look at your work so here i am :D
          for now i just read one of your poems called "demon love"
          whenever i have the time i will come around and read some more and then give you some feedback
          i also write poems so if you want to take a look no prob^^...i can't say wether they are good or not...when i write a poem i don't think about it ...i just write what i feel or i write down feelings that i remember but that i felt years ago...sometimes they come to my mind while sleeping...when i wake up the whole poem is in my head ready to be written down
          i don't know wether my poems are good..others say they are but i can't say it myself^^...ther only poem that i really KNOW is good is my poem "the prophecy" on which i based my story "the prophecy-when darkness comes" ...if you want to read it go to my story...it is on part three^^
          
          ok that's all for now...i commented on that poem of yours...i hope you understand what i mean with that comment and if it sounds harsh i'm really sorry cos i didn't mean it to sound that way..i am just trying to help you to get better =)