I just came across your books and so far I like them a lot but I would recommend adding more spaces throughout the paragraphs because it seems like it's just one big paragraph so add bigger spaces when moving to another paragraph or topic.
Ik it’s slow updates but this one chatter update is crazy plus they too short put 2-3 at a time i feel like u dragging the story atp not trying to be rude I love your books btw
Hi miss author,just wanted to let you know that none of my comments are directed at you,but the characters,I don’t mean any offense by any of my comments,I just get soo heated but I swear I mean no offense