TeamUmiZoomi7

Guys, I'm back in my HP era and I'm currently crying over Harry during Finals week. :)

underthestars232

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my new dystopian book World Left in Pieces. It’s my very first book and I want to improve. Comments and votes and shares would be appreciated. I’m looking for someone that could give me constructive criticism. Thank you so much for your time. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/327826633?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=under_the_stars232&wp_originator=NIlGA9aTFhHESJ6OnskzIJBlKGczabbZ4kaORp71rqYZ%2FMSlgy51xSqjbG1xyGeroeMyhp7fU3Ef%2BIp6JaI1z4F051OAwsc6f64%2F5EGv7S404aUGNltvS6%2FI%2FFxD7K6H

Fatimawriter_528

Hi reader, 
          
          I made a werewolf book.
          
          Chapter 2 is after years and tells about her life and so on etc. 
          
          I kindly ask that you read the chapters and tell me what you think? I would like to hear anything you say. 
          
          Thank you. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/314460899?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=FatimaRose_134&wp_originator=LzvxE7l5%2FmEcxvKFvwN570gYW6Oz3Y52EEsHoGZGoFXBJOKD45gcHt%2BvG8gsZoI95sXobwJ1prwC5fIEe%2B7COQ%2FkIahKSkw2KoMaS9C8CNv3slPMEr5xSFr5kL2Qj4nJ

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ShrivaliSinha

Hello, 
          I am Shrivali,
          I have recently started writing a book called "When the Swords Clashed" and I have seen your keen interest in reading, so I was hoping if you could read my book and give your valuable view.
          Love, Happy reading!