Hay I love your writing and since you are more active on fanfiction.net where my stories are I was wondering if you could read them I don't care if you go on a 20k long rant about how badly written they are I would just like someone who I consider a very good writer to take a look at them they are called Beyond the Strings, Beast of Strife and Father of Rome although that last was is more a five part one shot than a story any way it would be a great help and ignore my first story after two reviews in a four month span my passion for that story is dead