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Tembakwu
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Ok I just wanna point something out and I don't see how people actually like this. Just because you make some acid trip Shakespearean ass description of a fight scene doesn't mean it's a good fight scene. If you say "Villain crackled with a torrent of power, the very air crackling as in his presence. The very laws of nature and reality seemed to warp and bend at his will. Hero was undeterred, mustering his strength to block Villain's reality-bending waves." and then give some half ass dialogue, then that isn't a fight scene. You just described two moves and spewd out words in between. This also applies to writing like this in general. If you try to sound all sophisticated and even theatrical, reading it is plain horrible. It doesn't make you sound smart or good at writing, it frankly sounds like you pulled the shit straight from AI