TemperateAxis13

For anyone who has read the prologue, I need to take it down and fix a few inconsistencies that will appear later on if I don't fix them. Will be back up and fixed in a few hours

TemperateAxis13

Well, let me start off by saying Merry Christmas to y'all, I hope everyone has/had a great day. Here is my gift to anyone that wants  to read it. My first ever chapter of a story on this site/app. Something that I never thought I'd ever do in all honesty. Don't have high expectations and have a good time reading.

Mac24444

What don't you post the chapters you have done

TemperateAxis13

@Mac24444 I want to get at least Chapter 1 done and edited before I think about uploading anything. Then I also wanna see if there would be enough people interested in what I can do with the story before I go too deep into it all. As well as I would personally prefer it if I had Erens' permission before I commit to anything serious as well.
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Mac24444

What don't you do the book of Conflicted heart?

TemperateAxis13

So I still have a long way to go, but I am limited on when I can write as I work 7:30am-5pm and don't get home till 5:30pm. So by the time I get home I'm very tired. So if I do upload any, don't expect consistent updates haha
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TemperateAxis13

As I mentioned before, I'm currently writing an alternate version of what ErenYeagerJr and myself came up with. I don't wanna do the idea of book 2 that we had as I want that to be used in his story. But I'm still taking influence from our story and trying to stick close to that premise but throwing my own twist to it all. If that makes any sense. Currently I have a prologue done and am currently on chapter 1 at the part were Mylo finds the device in jayce's study.
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TemperateAxis13

@GasGasRacer1112
          
          
          Motocross story
          A young boy named Blake from Northern Ireland always dreamed of participating in a supercross event, but his dreams crumbled under him after having a serious accident while racing at the age of 8. Now 22, he has been racing again for almost 2 years and has been racing again for a couple of years now and with a few wins under his belt, but he wants to go bigger than just racing at home, he wants to travel and race others, so he goes across Europe, competing in the European championship, finishing 2nd in the title. In the off season he meets a girl, Lily Chee, and becomes quite close to her, but while they had fun, they only get to spend a couple of weeks hanging out before she's off again to another modelling gig, and during their time together they exchanged numbers, before eventually parting ways. Now in America, can Blake make a name for himself? What series will he compete in? Will fate bring him closer to Lily or will his drive to win block his mind from letting people get close?
          
          
          F1 story
          Born in 2001, young Northern Irish kid, David McCormick, managed by home hero Eddie Irvine, has had a successful junior Career, and during this career he became great friends and fierce rivals with young Aussie Oscar Piastri. That friendly rivalry follows right into their F1 careers. The only downside is, Oscar got the head start by getting onto the grid at the start of the 23 season unlike David, who gets signed into the RB family. ((David takes the place of Liam Lawson in 23 season and then takes over for Sergio Perez for the 2024 season as Sergio does not get signed on further) love interest is Abbi Pulling from F1 academy)

GasGasRacer1112

@TemperateAxis13 oh no I know the difference. I just misread
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TemperateAxis13

@GasGasRacer1112 common misconception, a lot of people think they are the same, they are actually 2 countries just on the same tiny island.
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GasGasRacer1112

@TemperateAxis13 I sense you're Irish by the main character choices?
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booblover12340

Thanks for the vote on the bio page for The Forgotten son of the Red Dragon Emperor .
          
          I hope you aren’t disappointed that it’s not a regular chapter or disappointed from my crazy upload schedule

TemperateAxis13

@booblover12340 no problem. I don't care about update schedules just as long as the book is good, and that is something you are doing. Making a good book.
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