TenNoKami

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Yeah, update: I scrapped my 1.0 version of the opening scene so have a free look at it (note: it obviously won't be used.)
          	
          	In a large store where the sounds of metal being bashed and the noises of people chattering, a boy stood at the counter in front of the blacksmith benches where others were, stood before him was a tall muscular old man who looked like his prime hadn't passed at all. The old man donned a black apron and a pair of goggles, with a large hammer strapped to his utility belt.
          	
          	"Y/N L/N... That's a rather interesting name, kid. Very intriguing name for someone wearing that... attire of yours. What are you looking to smith?" The tall buff old man spoke gruffly and rested his tree trunk of an arm on the counter.
          	
          	Standing before the old man was a skinny yet tall teenage boy with (H/C) hair and (E/C) eyes, he wore nothing more than a plain pink hoodie with cat ears on the hood, light pink trousers, and light-up white-pink trousers.
          	
          	"A pendant for my mother, for her birthday. I got the Mother's Day coupon here too." You said as you pulled the money and the Mother's Day coupon out of your pocket, giving 50% off on smithing expenses.
          	
          	"Pendant eh? You mama's boy?" The old man said as he swiped the coupon, and scanned it to check if it was a counterfeit but the scan came up clean.
          	
          	"Something like that, anyway, you still got any of that fake gold?" You asked to which the old man raised a brow, smirking slightly doe his beard made it hard to notice.
          	
          	"Heh, yeah, we do. Nice to finally know that someone else notices that fake bullshit excuse for gold, the patrons fall for that shit like it was formed from Midas's touch." The old man let out a deep chuckle, as he came around the counter and led you to your paid blacksmith bench. 
          	
          	Before you was a space full of smithing supplies, tongs, hammers and mallets, ladles, crucibles, carriers and a large furnace that was so immense in heat that just standing a few meters within it caused you to sweat.

TenNoKami

this message may be offensive 
Yeah, update: I scrapped my 1.0 version of the opening scene so have a free look at it (note: it obviously won't be used.)
          
          In a large store where the sounds of metal being bashed and the noises of people chattering, a boy stood at the counter in front of the blacksmith benches where others were, stood before him was a tall muscular old man who looked like his prime hadn't passed at all. The old man donned a black apron and a pair of goggles, with a large hammer strapped to his utility belt.
          
          "Y/N L/N... That's a rather interesting name, kid. Very intriguing name for someone wearing that... attire of yours. What are you looking to smith?" The tall buff old man spoke gruffly and rested his tree trunk of an arm on the counter.
          
          Standing before the old man was a skinny yet tall teenage boy with (H/C) hair and (E/C) eyes, he wore nothing more than a plain pink hoodie with cat ears on the hood, light pink trousers, and light-up white-pink trousers.
          
          "A pendant for my mother, for her birthday. I got the Mother's Day coupon here too." You said as you pulled the money and the Mother's Day coupon out of your pocket, giving 50% off on smithing expenses.
          
          "Pendant eh? You mama's boy?" The old man said as he swiped the coupon, and scanned it to check if it was a counterfeit but the scan came up clean.
          
          "Something like that, anyway, you still got any of that fake gold?" You asked to which the old man raised a brow, smirking slightly doe his beard made it hard to notice.
          
          "Heh, yeah, we do. Nice to finally know that someone else notices that fake bullshit excuse for gold, the patrons fall for that shit like it was formed from Midas's touch." The old man let out a deep chuckle, as he came around the counter and led you to your paid blacksmith bench. 
          
          Before you was a space full of smithing supplies, tongs, hammers and mallets, ladles, crucibles, carriers and a large furnace that was so immense in heat that just standing a few meters within it caused you to sweat.