zahraarhaz05
Can’t stop laughing at this @Tennisboysam, so funny ,link is down ↓
Iron3_Ghost
Please continue with "Transformers Prime: Dawn of a New Age"
aryas1988
@Tennisboysam Can you please make more chapters, seasons and episodes stories of Star Wars TV Shows Series Chapters, Seasons and Episodes Stories and Star Wars Movies Episodes Titles Combo Set Series Chapters, Seasons and Episodes Stories for Star Wars Rebels Renegade One Rise and Fall Season 1
Tennisboysam
@aryas1988 well SW Rebels RORAF follows the seasons and Episodes pretty closely season 1 is a few episodes and there more season 2 episodes in the next series of the story I'm gonna make it a four part each following the start wars Rebels seasons and episodes of course not all episodes make it inot the story or some episodes come before their actual season original for example season 2 has a lot of season 3 episodes within the book season 3 of the series though goes complete off from the actual season for a couple episodes but that mainly because of how season 2 ends for my story but yea hope your loving it and I'll update more here this month mainly because it my birthday month so each platform that I have the story in will have more chapters with this one having two. AO3 having 3 and hentai having 4 of course my patreon will have way more but I still need to plain it out.
NarHollow
@Tennisboysam much appreciated my friend, I'm glad the story reached your liking.
NarHollow
@Tennisboysam many thanks
Tennisboysam
@NarHollow give me a day or two I'll check it out :)
NarHollow
@Tennisboysam that's the one
NarHollow
Hello there friend, I have checked your book and it's really interesting, enough to make you a good judge of a book, I need that, an opinion on my newly published story if it is possible, I would appreciate that a lot.
Tennisboysam
@NarHollow Hey man just finished reading your book and overall amazing. im really not much into books like that but dang it captured me in and made me continue reading lol. There really isn't much for me to say In stuff you have to fix story-wise wise you did everything good. You introduced Nova great and I really love that part with the old man and Nova. Grammer and all the other stuff are great i will say though that in chapter 3 when they're talking make sure to add the commas before and after to show that characters are talking but other than that it is great and well written. Overall great book it interesting and the story isn't all over the place which is great. I did go and read people's comments and they like it and want more so that's great it shows you're doing a great job with the book and honestly it's what we want for people to love it and enjoy it and continue reading. I say keep it up man continue writing as it a great book.