SnowfakesElegance

Hi. I just read your book ‘Love Between The Stars’ and I have to say I was so deeply engrossed in what you had written, it was devastating to know you lost inspiration and motivation with it. I thought it had soo much potential. I could see that you could have had both Alex and her daughter leave Earth as the Young Yautja is from a different clan/tribe to the one Scar was. I could also see that you could put many unexpected twists and turns in the story with Alex somehow getting into trouble herself and a mystery Yautja came in saving her. She notices small similarities to Scar quirks and behaviours but thinks it’s all her imagination being around so many Yautja again. She finds peace on the new clan and watches the blossoming relationship of her daughter with all the anxiety of a mother waiting for her daughter to be challenged to do her Chiva (think it’s called). And somehow this mysterious wondering Yautja keeps popping up and some how is almost like a guardian angel watching over her daughter. She is very suspicious and weary of him and eventually tries to fight him, amidst which his helmet comes off to reveal it is Scar, alive. He was not truly dead, recovered and lost his memory for a while but once it came back his clan lied saying she was the one killed (not liking humans) so he spent his years wondering after loosing his mate (with no idea of the pregnancy). Only to run into her when she was in danger but he too thought he imagined thing. Then put together she had a daughter but thought it was to a different Yautja (but protected from the shadows anyway. Then it all comes out...... ETC. Anyway, it was amazing and such a shame as so many possibilities and potential. I hope you look at it again one day. 

Sherlovian176

I like your 'From no one to warrior' book it's cool when you finish that one can you make another one but different sister name or something?, if you want to 

TeresaHeishtein

Sure, only problem is that update slowly so it will take time but I can try. I'm happy you like my book, thank you for reading.
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