catprincess99

err..how is the end of my bk lame :(

catprincess99

i see.. well...oh well, i never bothered to edit anyways so..
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TexanGals

@catprincess99  The writing style was good, it just left too much unknown/unresolved. For example, why did the dad even *want* the power he hoped to get bad enough to actually kill his friend?! And I didn't notice it ever explain why the godmother got banished in the first place.. and it would seem that the were cats didn't have ANY other packs... and that they are now extinct adept her, which is sad.
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TexanGals

@catprincess99  Well... I am not entirely sure that it makes sense.. for example, it never says why the dad wanted to be so powerful that he literally killed his 'friend' or why the godmother got banished... and was that supposedly the only pack of were-cats? AND what happens now, do their kids and up were cats or were wolves? I guess that the were cats just end up extinct.. which is a little sad!
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