@Texanstoryteller
You still writing stories
@gantrill yes......but they get impossible to finish on the fly. I'm righting one now actually, I plan on finishing it then releasing it as a weekly thing.
Hello, its me JustaWattReader. Thanks for messaging me on my conversations. I've gladly accepted your request to criticize your work. Here's what's on my mind, an honest reaction to it.
I've noticed a little bit of grammatical errors in which might distract the readers from understanding the context that's intended to be actually written in the chapter. Yes, i know that you might have not noticed it yourself. But other than this, everything is great. I myself create errors as well, but i return to those chapters to check on it and fix the problems. Organize this one problem of yours and you might make a better understanding of what to do in further increasing the accuracy of your descriptions on the scene you're about to tell. Your overall ability to make a good story to read is quite astounding. Unlike me who's limited to my knowledge of english dialect. Your's is better.
Keep up the good work and don't forget to reread the chapter you're about to publish. Always double or triple your rereads in it before updating the book and publish the very chapter you're about to release. Goodluck for your further advance. I hope this helps you out. I didn't want to sound offensive or anything if i did seem to be in this message, but i just did what you told me to do. Bye mate! Im looking forward for your book's development in the future.
@JustaWattreader02 thank you for your feedback I'll go edit my chapters. oh and tell angus I said hi .