hi, sorry for being a nuisance, I just had to bring up some things about you. I was talking with a couple of friends that have written some stories that you have commented on and I just wanted to tell you that your comments are, yes sometimes very helpful, but they make people really uneasy. I know that nobody is a professional here, and sometimes you don't like where the story is going, and thats totally fine and okay, but everyone here is working hard to write something from their heart and you're basically picking out the bits you don't like and exposing them. I know that I don't know your intentions, and I'm sure that they are somehow good and not intended for hurt, but they do hurt and I think that your unfiltered opinion, being so often saw, kinda makes writers think that they're worthless. you're probably a firm believer in constructive criticism, and thats fine too! It helps! but, I think that you should really look more in-depth when it comes to commenting so much, you know? you commented on every chapter of my book basically and although I'm not complaining, there are other people that you are kind of offending so... please take into consideration, other people's feelings.