Marila

I've written a new horror/romance story called Under His Protection. Try it, you might like it!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/407935326?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=babybluecrayons

I posted a new part.... Enjoy 

I'm going on a hiatus till March 9th since my annual exams are coming and I have to study super hard so please don't be mad at me I'll try super hard to update if I can

Hiii!!! 
          I just had a small suggestion to make- also, just a suggestion, try putting the dialogues in quotation marks and adding spaces between dialogues to make it clearer and more captivating!
          
          For example, from your latest chapter:
          
          Yuri says, "I know I know but it was all to protect them from Kaizer (Keifer's father). That devil of a man killed Keif's mother and we know he has a lot of control over our families and this is only to protect them" 
          
          David says, "I know but this feels like a part of my heart is gone" 
          
          "I know how this feels David, I really do" Yuri replies. 
          

Hiiii
          I see you've liked my fanfiction Love And Other Catastrophies: Section E Origin, you should check out the sequel- Love And Other Catastrophies: Section E
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/405587795?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=babybluecrayons