Can I have y'alls opinions on smth?
I have to write a fantasy story for school, right? And I'm just wondering if this is too much:
Title: the four divine realms.
- once, a long time ago, the was a place called Elivania (El-iv-ayn-ia) and it was ruled by mortals, the mortals resided in a place called the void, the void was like the control center for Elivania, but one day, an event called the great glitch took place, separating Elivania into four divine realms, The Mortal Realm, The Fairytale Realm, The Light Realm, and the Dark Realm.
- mortals, once the all powerful rulers of Elivania got caught in the middle of the mayhem, getting sent to the Mortal Realm, where their powers buried themselves deep inside, Vayi (Vi-e) the mortal who got stuck in the void during the great glitch, chose four bloodlines from each realm that would be able to access the void, before she died.
I will tell you more about the light realm and its residents later.