kiriahkache

Hi!!!
          
          I was wondering if you could read the first 5  chapter of my book and let me know what you think!! I’m a new writer (kinda) and I would love some feedback. So please read, comment, and vote!! It’ll be greatly appreciated!!!
          
          Thanks in advance! 
          
          
          https://my.w.tt/9gn2kWPlFO