ThatOneSaiyan

Hello, just wanna say thank you for all the support for my first book about the original dragon ball. It’s been a lot of fun writing and reading the few comments, and even criticism about the story. It really helps me understand what to change to make it make more sense. I also apologize for the lack of updates, being caught up in work and honestly playing the hell outta Sparking Zero. It’s super fun. I’ll be writing the next chapters soon, should be releasing in the upcoming days. 
          	
          	Another thing is I got a comment about a love interest in the story. For at least the original dragon ball I feel as though it doesn’t necessarily need a love interest so I won’t be putting one in. As for when i eventually do DBZ and Super. I don’t mind giving y’all a love interest if y’all want. If you’d like, put down who you want as your love interest. 
          	
          	Again, thank you for reading my story.

ProphtTGH

Now this here, is a problem most fanfic authors have, but there doesn’t have to be just one love interest and no I don’t mean harem. He is a grown man you’re making a virgin by , by the time you choose an interest in DBZ, cause let’s face it 90% chance it’s 18, Goku will be 24 during the saiyans and 30 during cell, even if we say he 14 when he came to earth that means he will be a virgin at 44 and since they most likely get together during timeskip, that can only increase. I’m not saying have him get married right this second but you could at least make him not completely pathetic, and no I’m not asking for lemons but some details that expand on the characters and their relationships would be nice.
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ThatOneSaiyan

Hello, just wanna say thank you for all the support for my first book about the original dragon ball. It’s been a lot of fun writing and reading the few comments, and even criticism about the story. It really helps me understand what to change to make it make more sense. I also apologize for the lack of updates, being caught up in work and honestly playing the hell outta Sparking Zero. It’s super fun. I’ll be writing the next chapters soon, should be releasing in the upcoming days. 
          
          Another thing is I got a comment about a love interest in the story. For at least the original dragon ball I feel as though it doesn’t necessarily need a love interest so I won’t be putting one in. As for when i eventually do DBZ and Super. I don’t mind giving y’all a love interest if y’all want. If you’d like, put down who you want as your love interest. 
          
          Again, thank you for reading my story.

ProphtTGH

Now this here, is a problem most fanfic authors have, but there doesn’t have to be just one love interest and no I don’t mean harem. He is a grown man you’re making a virgin by , by the time you choose an interest in DBZ, cause let’s face it 90% chance it’s 18, Goku will be 24 during the saiyans and 30 during cell, even if we say he 14 when he came to earth that means he will be a virgin at 44 and since they most likely get together during timeskip, that can only increase. I’m not saying have him get married right this second but you could at least make him not completely pathetic, and no I’m not asking for lemons but some details that expand on the characters and their relationships would be nice.
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