ThatRook

Of losses, fears and despair.
          	Of wilting roses and sleeping bears.
          	Of unwilling romance 
          	Of private affairs 
          	Of forgotten voices and step less stairs.
          	
          	Regarding the life of death
          	And the growth of stunts
          	
          	About silent echoes 
          	And a cave less man.
          	
          	Apropos stolen minds and heavy winds,
          	Gloomy smiles and scaly skin.
          	
          	Of deceased gods,
          	Of newfound slayers.
          	
          	I shall present to you my noetic layers.

Sim-AntinI

Hey Rook,
          Thank you so much for taking the time to read the Feral Mate and voting. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story & if you have feedback, I am all ears.
          You have a great day/evening.
          Warm regards,
          Lauren

Sim-AntinI

@ThatRook Thank you so much. I will lookout for the repeated words when I edit. :) I am so glad you're enjoying the story xoxo L
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ThatRook

(@Sim-AntinI) Hey Lauren,
            I'm loving the Feral Mate. The plot is superb and the characters relatable, so as far as that goes there's not much to add. I think I've caught a few repeated words on the first chapters ( only like twice, so don't worry), so I'd keep an eye out for that. This book is by no means what I thought it would be and I'm honestly glad it isn't. It's an epic read.
            Keep up the good work,
            Rook
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ThatRook

Of losses, fears and despair.
          Of wilting roses and sleeping bears.
          Of unwilling romance 
          Of private affairs 
          Of forgotten voices and step less stairs.
          
          Regarding the life of death
          And the growth of stunts
          
          About silent echoes 
          And a cave less man.
          
          Apropos stolen minds and heavy winds,
          Gloomy smiles and scaly skin.
          
          Of deceased gods,
          Of newfound slayers.
          
          I shall present to you my noetic layers.

Snape75

Hi @rookiefire
          
          Thank you so much for adding I Was Shooting For The Moon, I Hit Two Stars to your reading list! Hope you will enjoy the series                             ❁◕ ‿ ◕❁

ThatRook

@Snape75 
            
            I did! I finished reading 'I was shooting for the moon, I hit two stars ' yesterday. Totally loved it. I'll be reading some of your others stories too. ( they are already in my 'read later' list)
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