Greetings and merry Christmas eve!!! :)
Thanx for becoming a fan! It really means a lot to me. :)
I read your story, and I liked it, except for the part about her losing her viginity. (see I'm a christian, so I believe that sex should be saved for marriage. I know not everyone does, and I mean no offense to those people, it just doesn't feel right to me...) Other then that I think you have an awesome idea, seems very sweet and has a lot of potential. :)
Have a very merry Christmas eve!
Yours Randomly,
ImagineThat
p.s. Thanx again for becoming a fan!!!