That_gReat_Snail
Chapter 14 of "Secret of the Scarlet Shadow" Is Out! (Killua's POV)
That_gReat_Snail
Love_You_Killua
Hey, the story was okay, why did you unpublished it..... I liked it very much.... I just told you, that doesn't mean you have to unpublished it
That_gReat_Snail
@Love_You_Killua no no no it wasn’t that, no worries. I unpublished it because I wanted to rewrite a few things because when I was drafting the next chapter, I thought it would be better that way.
That_gReat_Snail
Chapter 3 of "My Selfish Wish" is out!
Cloudii_Kin
its good to be back and rereading my favorite fic of yours that i read annually
That_gReat_Snail
@Cloudii_Kin Omg I can’t believe you still read that story LMAO! I haven’t look at it since I wrote it XDD I’m glad you like it, though. Wish you the best of luck!
That_gReat_Snail
new chapter (13) of "secret of the scarlet shadow" is out!
Love_You_Killua
@That_gReat_Snail well, I will read the book, it's on the 6th stage of my reading list..... I have a list on which your secret of the scarlet Shadow is on 6 number....so I will give review a bit letter
Love_You_Killua
I have a problem.... I like smut but I can't write it.... my smuts are god damn disgusting.... gibe me some tips for it well now I know that you are 20 so... it will be fine... a young brother is asking help to his big brother.... will you help me?
That_gReat_Snail
Ugh, I just posted the ENTIRE rewrite of 50k words. "Secret of the Scarlet Shadow" Give it a read!
Here's the link: https://www.wattpad.com/1478590252-secret-of-the-scarlet-shadow-the-biggest-mystery
Anyways, I'm almost done with the ACTUAL cover of the book. I just wanted to post sooner than later so I wouldn't of had to spend even longer than I just did posting it all at once.
Love_You_Killua
Hey..... I read your " My Selfish Wish " a bit and to your concern.... it isn't that mature..... at least less than what I read.... I'm 16 bro the same as you.... and also... I don't think in this story gon doesn't love killua. It's the same story as " My Desire ". I can tell that are you going to write, in the last gon will end up with killua. Gon will be used by retz and because he loves retz, he can't leave her. Retz will try to hurt killua. Killua will hurt himself.... some, I kinda had a draft story of mine just like this....
And bro give me so.e tips for writing...
Your friend — The Killugon Lover
Love_You_Killua
@That_gReat_Snail and also.... it's not say someone out of no where BUT..... in my last relationship, I became physical.... or you know that word— I'm totally saying this " I had sex with my girlfriend " but the relationship was toxic... she was with me just for experiencing sex and I was too fool to realise it but I never knew I was gay until now, I realized I never wanted a relationship with a girl... so kinda know what's smut , I just can't write it down.... my smut are like when I read other's smut... I think wow!! When I read mine I think Ewww!!! ... kinda gross and it sucks
Love_You_Killua
@Love_You_Killua so.... I was right.... it isn't going to be a simple fanfiction ship story or something...... you are kinda my type of writer..... if you have time, try to read good boy ( Rewrite ) it's one of my favorite book here plus...... like I said, your stories, I really really like them. I just two of your written books but I know, you are a good writer.... BTW, if possible can I get your contact.... pretty please..... this platform isn't that much comforting and I wanna talk with you... so pretty please . Here is my contact ⬇️⬇️ 9330221311
That_gReat_Snail
@Love_You_Killua Google and lots of reading will be your best friend with that. I HATE the way I’ve written it all the way until “my selfish wish” and onwards. Before then, I couldn’t even look at it without going ugh ew what is this (even tho I like reading it just couldn’t read my own). Tbh, the only good smut I found on Wattpad was Black Butterfly, which was originated on Ao3 LOL. I love this app, but with the filter system, it really does just have a lack of quality in stories over Ao3. It might be the age range that Wattpad has over Ao3 though. I could always DM you some good links from Ao3 that I like and even took notes from. But smut is a very tricky thing to write. It goes all the way to understanding too repetitive of sentences in grammar, NEEDING dialogue to not make it just seem action heavy, not using certain words for Yk what, dragging the action out to like 2k words minimum, and then lots of internal monologue.
That_gReat_Snail
MWAHAHAHA 4 LONG YEARS AND ITS FINISHED! 60K WORDS AND ITS FINISHED AHAHAHHAHAHA (A Life Foretold)
That_gReat_Snail
My god. Okay, I forgot if I told you guys, but I have rewritten “Shadows of the Truth” for the recent HunterxHunter Big Bang. It’s renamed as “Secret of the Scarlet Shadow” and is up to date on my Ao3 account (username found in my Wattpad Bio).
Anyways, I’m stillll working on the cover for the book is why I haven’t posted it here yet, but there’s literally 12 chapters of 50k words total that I will post and it will DEFINITELY show I HAVE been writing and haven’t just been goofing off— like holy sh*t.
Hope life as been well for you all!
-Savannah_Rea <333
Love_You_Killua
But if it's the last, I want a proper ending....... well I know you write beautifully so.... I think your writing will satisfy me, anyways
Love_You_Killua
@That_gReat_Snail but shouldn't you think, I should write one more or two.... I don't like weird ending