Thatpotterhead321

Hi guys!! A new chapter of "Summertime Love" was released today, please check it out. Also, do vote and comment, any feedback is appreciated :)

_Talesbystarlight

Hey author, first of all sorry for posting this here without your permission but I would love it if you give my book a try. I promise it won't disappoint you ❤️
          
          As a new author your support means a lot. Vote and comment on how you feel ❤️ 
          
          Let's support each other in our journey. Do let me know your opinion ❤️ 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/381694497?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_Talesbystarlight

Thatpotterhead321

@_Talesbystarlight  Sure!
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Thatpotterhead321

@_Talesbystarlight Sure!
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_Talesbystarlight

@Thatpotterhead321 Are you ok if we follow each other ?
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_Wee_Monster

Hello there,
          
          Sorry for disturbing you I would like to introduce my story 'Addicted to you' ,https://www.wattpad.com/story/367334706?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=_Sahana_sana
          
          I want you to try my story and give a honest review of my story. And I hope you will enjoy it. 
          
          Sana♡

Thatpotterhead321

@_Wee_Monster sure
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Yaahvika

Hey there 
          Hope you're doing well ☺️ 
          
          I would be really greatful if you could give my book titled HIS CAPTIVE HEART a chance ❤️ 
          It's a emotional rollercoaster, which will keep you at the edge of the seat and I am sure you gonna love it ✨✨
          
          Eagerly waiting for your precious feedback ❤️
          
          Consider following, if my work manages to captivate your attention ✨

Yaahvika

@Yaahvika ☺️
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Thatpotterhead321

@Yaahvika Sure, can't wait to read it :)
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annnoyingkid

Helloooooo
          GET READY TO FALL IN LOVE!
          
          "You are mine" - A Heartwarming Romance story. 
          
          Join Rimi and Rishabh on their journey of love, laughter, and happily-ever-afters.
          
          READ NOW and discover a romance that will capture your heart!
          
          Genre: Romance
          Rating: Sweet and Sexy
          
          START READING TODAY
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/387569826?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=annnoyingkid
          
          SORRY FOR DISTURBING

annnoyingkid

@Thatpotterhead321 awww thank you for your feedback I promise I will improve this. 
            And thanks for reading... :)
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Thatpotterhead321

@annnoyingkid Hi there! I wanted to say that I appreciate the concept of your story "You are mine." You have a lot of creativity and potential as a writer. I have a few suggestions that might help enhance your storytelling further. 
            
            One aspect I noticed is the pacing—it feels a bit quick. It might be beneficial to take some time to develop the characters a little more before they meet. For example, providing insights into Rimi's personality and her interest in wedding planning could add depth to the story. Learning about characters through their actions and dialogue can be more engaging than introducing them all at once at the beginning.
            
            If the moment when Rimi and Rishab meet were to happen a bit later, perhaps in the third or fourth chapter, it could build anticipation and make their connection more impactful.
            
            I hope this feedback is taken in the spirit of constructive criticism, as I truly believe you have a wonderful story to tell. Considering your age (I’m assuming you’re about 15 based on your profile) the writing is commendable. Keep up the great work!
            Please don't take this the wrong way.
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Thatpotterhead321

@annnoyingkid  :)
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