Cheshire_SK
@BeachyG1rl whoops! Forgot to tag you in the last message.
The-Strings-of-Fate
Cheshire_SK
I had an idea. Instead of me trying to get all the graphic pics and whatever else onto my phone so I can use them, what if we published a different story on this profile with a bunch of little teasers/“trailers” of sorts to get people interested in the story?
IDK. What do you think?
The-Strings-of-Fate
Got chapter 6 done!
Feel free to edit. :)
The-Strings-of-Fate
Alright! And I started on chapter 7 but don’t have time to finish it rn but I will eventually
The-Strings-of-Fate
Alrighty I did the graphics! Let me know if you want me to make another one with something different or if you don’t like any
Cheshire_SK
@BeachyG1rl The actress’ name is Su Burcu Yazgi. Not sure what show/character the pic is from.
The-Strings-of-Fate
I also had a question, did you know what character your face claim for Ava is? I just have an idea.
The-Strings-of-Fate
Made some tweaks to chapter 5. Nice chapter.
Also, I accidentally deleted the picture of the gun while I was changing the word count. So, you’ll have to put that back in. Sorry. •_•
I’ll get started on Chapter 6 as soon as I can. :)
BeachyG1rl
@Cheshire_SK it’s totally ok, also, i thought I could make some graphics for both girls? I would need your approval but I’ve been into making graphics so I thought I could
The-Strings-of-Fate
We’ll finally Chapter 5 is complete. Feel free to give me feedback and fix it a bit, sorry for the wait on its arrival.
Cheshire_SK
@BeachyG1rl How’s it going? I noticed you haven’t started chapter 5 so I just wanted to check in. Are you stumped? Busy? Other? Sorry if this is annoying. I’m not trying to make you write the chapter if you’re not ready to or anything. Just wondering how you are and if I can help with anything. :) <3 -Cheshire
BeachyG1rl
Yeah, I get being tired after camp, i spend 3 weeks in August as a counselor of a bunch of different aged girls and it is exhausting, so I totally understand it
Cheshire_SK
I’m sorry to hear that. I’ll be praying for you.
That’s fine, I totally get being busy. I don’t have any specific ideas for starting Chapter 5, but if I think of it, I’ll maybe write start it this week. (I just got back from camp, so I’m still recovering. XD)
BeachyG1rl
It’s completely fine, I had some family business to take care of and I’m still picking up the pieces, if you would like you could start Chapter 5 and I’ll try to pick up when I can, it’s just been a difficult time with my family as I’m constantly at my grandparents house cause we fear my grandfather might pass away soon, like I said if you want to you can start Chapter 5, if not I will hopefully start it in the next day or so.
The-Strings-of-Fate
I finished chapter 4. :)
The-Strings-of-Fate
I read it and I think it’s great! I’ll start chapter 5 whenever I have the chance
The-Strings-of-Fate
You know how Percy can control peoples sweat. I was thinking of giving Penny the ability to control peoples blood since our body is like 60% water, what do you think? Along with the healing water and controlling water and breathing underwater.
The-Strings-of-Fate
I have finished chapter 2!!!!!
I made it to Frank talking to his grandma. Let me know if there’s anything major I need to adjust.
Also, I was wondering how we want to do the final battle with Alcyoneus. They get to Hubbard Glacier by riding Arion, but five people will not fit on the horses back.
Maybe, they could stay with Ella when she refuses to go on the plane and Percy and the others leave her in the woods and send a message to Tyson. Then, they travel back to Camp Jupiter with them.
Idk, what do you think?
The-Strings-of-Fate
@BeachyG1rl Okay, I read chapter 3 and fixed some grammatical errors. Great chapter. I’ll probably start chapter 4 tomorrow. :)
The-Strings-of-Fate
I finished Chapter 3, it’s a shorter chapter but I feel like it ended of good, feel free to make tweaks if you’d like!
BeachyG1rl
That’s a good idea, it gives Penny and Ava some time to talk and get Penny to trust Ava. I like that idea. Also, I read chapter 2 and 8 think it is amazing!!!