to yeet or not to yeet

Hello! I have a story you might like called, "SORRY BAE I YOONGI" a Mafia BTS Yoongi/Suga X Mafia Y/N ff! I would love some feedback on it as well as possibly some love! 
          
          Thanks!- link: https://my.w.tt/JuDBeDg3ccb

Hi ! I just wanna say that your username is awesome and hilarious ! ;) 

I have soooo many Ideas right now

I am thinking about starting an oikawa x Oc story called "The Beauty and the Beast", but I need others Opinions! 
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