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The pilot to Enchanted has been published!! I apologise for the crappy starting, I'm a beginner so please try to be nice. ówò
Constructive criticism would be appreciated though!! Thank you for reading
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@The0gay0bagel I think you did amazing!! It immersive and so much as the first sentence was a read grabber. I found myself deal into after just a second of reading, and it's very hard for me to get invested this quickly. I can't wait for more updates and more background, you're doing great