Ok so lemme say smt, I feel you did the right thing with then ending of the divine mortal, now some people may say, “it’s not a happy ending so it’s a bad ending” no that just isn’t true
You and the readers need to understand that you can’t just warp the reality of a world that you made or a world your working with, that wouldn’t make sense,
you can’t say “oh ace some how survived and won against black for his body” no that’s a bad ending, because it wouldn’t make sense, we saw him die, so that is a bad ending, because it doesn’t make sense
A bad ending in a story doesn’t mean the ending it’s self is bad in terms of quality, no, that just isn’t true, the ending isn’t happy, but it fits with the world you’re working with
Overall, I say you did good for you’re first ending.
(Also if you understand this last part, finish it)
Woah, nice cock