TheAmazingCritique

Hello there I was wondering if you wouldn't mind giving one of my stories a critique? 
          It's about the four elements and I'm afraid that it's either becoming too cliche or hard to follow...or something. And there's really nobody here who give straight up blunt critiques, which I so desperately crave. If you would be so kind to give feedback on my story, please don't take into account my feelings. I want honest criticism.

Thank you so much for fanning! :)) Means a lot.

Thanks so much for becoming a fan!! I really really appreciate that! ^_^

Thanks for fanning me. owo <3

I appreciate the fan. I am completely open to criticism and would love it if you could help me improve my writing...

Thank you for fanning:)
          
          ~Sophiee~ <3

Thanks for the fan(: appreciate it! 

Hey there,
          
          Just wanted to say thanks for fanning.  Your support means the world to me :)
          
          Tara

I Don't know if you read any of my work, but you became of fan, so thank you! Anyways, I would love it if you would tell me what you think of my stories. Anyone you want, I only have two, She Doesn't Know How I Feel and My Obsession With a Slanted Mirror. Thanks a ton, I really appreciate it!