Balvino Romero

You still here?

I need to know before I continue writing...
          
          ummm... 
          well....
          
          does my story flow?
          I know it's a little fast but hey I can slow down!
          so let me know.

I feel like i am being ignored can you guys pls show some love?
          School has really been weighing me down
          pls comments.

REACHED CHAPTER 10
          I Know I Know a small achievement
          especially since I have small chapters
          But it is very important to me and i am very happy to have this much support.
          
          Also some comments wont hurt. :D

comments comments Comments!
          pls show some support!
          comments really show your liking the book.
          so pls comment

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you at school now?

reply here for who the girl in the last chapter is.
          pls I can't continue untill someone comments.
          NAME. and how she looks.

followed I guys as a thanks :)

I need help fixing the grammer in my book so comment on all the spelling/grammer mastakes so that new people reading it can understand :P