Keaton Jones

Wow...... So many views on Learning to be a Female. I'm shock in truth. Was I that good or that bad? XD

I need help with creating a language so yeah... Anyone that can help me with hopefully very single part?

Okay, like with the last one, names are random but you get the idea in a sense of what it would be like. Anyway, what do you think? Said it all. And at the moment I just want to do one and not both for reasons and both would have to have different name systems and so on. Anyway, vote and let me know what you think. Also, if anyone is good with coming up with languages then please comment that since I'll need help, mainly with the written form. Also, with the first one if I were to do it. Not sure if I would make the two main characters lovers in a sense. More of just friends but I have no idea at the moment, still forming in my head.
          
          And sorry for the spam, but there is a 2000 character limit for things like this sadly so yeah.

"We have finally arrive in another galaxy, the prototype worked!" Aorian exclaim with joy because his now been tested prototype Hyperdrive worked and not rip us to our bare atoms. "Good work Aorian, for what would take weeks, or months, is not just hours. Refine your hyperdrive more and I'll think about putting them into the ships." I said, and wave my hand to dismiss him. "I will my lord." He said before walking away. "You do know this might be a bad idea since we haven't seen all of our own galaxy yet commander." Laorian said. "I know, but we are for the most part masters of our own galaxy, and we must go and see what secrets other galaxies hold, to now only find out more but advance ourselves more." "I know, but is it wise at this time before the fleet is fully built?" "That we will learn soon enough, besides, they are only months away from being done." "Yes but, what if we find a foe with a greater hyperdrive then we do at all, what do we do then since they could from their side to ours in minutes or seconds." She said. "You worry too much at the moment my dear." I said and finally turning around and face her. She had a frown on her face, with her lips curling down gently and her eyebrows bunch together, along with her eyes being a wide narrow look. Yet, I knew she felt comfortable at last inside but keeps up how she is suppose to look in moments like this.

Nan, only an idiot would think that would happen. They can't be that powerful, right? But if they were, why would they disappear after doing that? Guess I'll never know because only idiots think dumb crap like this."
          "They are strange." Raka said. "I know, but what are they after?" I said. For we are watching them ever since they appeared in the tunnels of Nakrah. With their strange things, and some of them even looking strange, more so with their weapons. "Your Highness, maybe they are trying to find Atlantis." "They most likely are, or after one of The Great Beasts of Nakrah." I countered. "Unless they know little from The Beasts, I doubt it, besides. Their clothing looks to be for other things than that." Raka said once again. "We won't know for some more time won't we now Raka?" I said, with annoyance in my voice. "Yes your Highness Kaela." He said with smugness in his voice. 
          
          Note, just random made up names. If I were to make it a book, I would have to make a real Atlantean language which would be so much fun! Anyway, now for the latter.

I been thinking, after watching Atlantis The Lost Empire last night. Got my thinking of doing a book about Atlantis, both two different kinds of stories are in my head. One, about well my kind of Atlantis which is in the future and everything. Just think kinda like Stargate for one thing, or Starcraft is better for era wise in a sense. And then the other one, similar with time and everything with Atlantis. With it being sometime at most around today, at least, in the 1800's. Always, think about these things after you read these story parts I have made. Also, for the latter, I kinda want to do one view point but. Do you think it would be better to do one or two view points? Anyway, story time!
          
          "We have been here for weeks! Where is the City already! John scream out in frustration of the long travel, but mainly of losing most of the people that were with us among other things while our encounter with man creatures, mainly the Dragon. Out of the blue someone grab my shoulder and pulled me around. It was our leader Neil. "I know you been working hard and everything, but. How much longer will it take to get to Atlantis?" He said. "Well, I'm not sure in truth, could be a few minutes to a few more days" I said, fear and bile rising into my throat. "Well, that's better than last time I asked you boy." He then went wherever he goes to. I breathe deeply and looked back to the book, getting tired of him calling me boy. Crack. I turn to my right upon hearing the sound of rock hitting rock. Yet, I saw nothing once again. "My ears must be playing tricks on me indeed." I muttered. What bug me about this book was how little detailed it is for the most part. As if it wanted you to find out stuff for yourself, or most of what was known was lost when Atlantis disappeared. But, nobody how much I thought, the book made no sense how and why Atlantis disappear from the world for. Was it the great flood during Noah's time or another flood?
          Had to break it up due to limit

The Traveler, a story you would read?
          I been wondering a type of story in a sense. For if you don’t know. A Traveler is a person that is stuck in a unless amounts of life times kinda like
          
          Like the show Quantum Leap.
          
          
          However, unlike it. Travelers can end up in any universe, any world, any time period, pretty much almost ANYWHERE. And not always are they there to save people. Sometimes they are meant to kill someone for the better of all, and many other cases. It’s pretty much not only a random, but very long story series in truth. I could write as much books as possible until I die and barely cover the whole thing, and that’s just with one Traveler alone.
          
          
          
          Anyway, my question is, would you want to read story, short stories of mainly one Traveler? And maybe with others in it besides one other Traveler. Would you read it? And it will be done here if anyone wants to read it.

I been thinking for awhile and well. Does anyone care to read any of my stories? And not Learning to be a Female. Does anyone care about my stories anymore?

I somewhat have forgotten this place, sorry about that. But out of wonderment, would you guys also want me to post one or both of my stories that I'm doing on G+?
          I'll give you the links and you choose if you want the stories on here also. And would love if someone give me cover pictures or something to use as a cover for the stories. 
          https://plus.google.com/u/0/collection/gIMcHB
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thanks for the follow man