TheBaccaKing

HAPPY 6 YEARS IN WATTPAD! 

So hopefully this helps your confidence a bit and if someone says something or you need help feel free to message me I have helped a few writers in a lot of ways even if it has nothing to do with a story at all I'm not busy just text me whenever if you feel like it and no I'm not doing punctuation to anyone who asks me I'm writing mad long that I'm maxing out the word limit each time my fingers just move when my brain is talking is a curse so no I'm not stopping to do every punctuation unless it has to do with a story just wanted to announce that cause people bother me about it all the time but my punctuation is decent in a story and also help fixing stories basically a specialized Editor of sorts and that doesn't mean I'm the best in the world that just means aren't many editors putting themselves out there so I will since I'm decentralized I would say

Sorry for the shit full it is nothing bad its about one of your stories I personally thought it was really good I was going to comment but what I had to say was wayyyyy to long that's why its separated the third is the last part the first is where you start sorry its so long but wrong or not that's what I personally think your story was really good and original it upset me that people were so rude I understand criticism makes a good writer but they were completely just shitting on your story repeatedly I understand that from better writers which still isn't right but understandable but from those who suck yah I checked there stories some didn't have any they are not that amazing either but yours is one of the most original I have ever seen and I have many stories in separate lists at least 500 but I have read thousands you could even check my account and I believe the story is original

          End is no fool he knows how to fight he is probably the oldest if not one of them and he is the end Percy is what they used to stop end but Percy is stronger than chaos and so would End most likely they only broke kronos control because kronos is faded but chaos should be stringer than him but he just let them destroy everything he honestly is a fool and now will attempt to break the control when this could have been avoided even ends assault would be postponed or thwarted if he did it while they had some control but he stood there thinking about it instead of acting and that is why End is now in power if anyone has the patience to read this think about it most of it seems accurate and then that means this is a amazing story and remember its a fan fiction power levels originating from history myths to the books mean shit to the writer a pig could beat Chao's ass in a story because in the mind of the writer that is a possibility and that is law in there story so please dont disrespect the story it seems odd but perhaps what I said could have shown some enlightenment but if you feel I'm wrong just say something

but not the time but anyway end is quite powerful he is stronger and in most fanfics end is bested by Percy and chaos helping and maybe some more so Percy hestia and Poseidon End to put the cherry on top primidorial of fate is gone there is no way the fates could control end and the others obviously and was prepared he has a army the Olympians are weak chaos is recovering this means that from weakest to strongest is Percy strongest in the universe end second chaos third then counting the Olympian council cause the other major and minor  primidorials are dusted or majorly injured the Olympians did not even do anything so they are basically reserved which is why they are up so high they are fourth zues then hades fifth then the rest going down the line then the last would be the army which obviously End is striking at there moment of weakness he has a full powerful army and the Olympians and chaos barely have anything as they went after Percy and the other two which are his best they won't survive going after them again they only managed because their strongest took there lives just to knock them out for a bit then they woke up and nothing changed so honestly this is perfect once you look at the entire picture 
           

But then again it makes some sense any primidorial gods that did not join kronos ended up appearing with chaos so it is only natural that since end was the only one not to appear he would be the final enemy his name states his move he waited for the battle to end and used that to his advantage to get the three in their weakened state using the same manipulation kronos used and he is bow going to be the Olympians end he used a very smart plan and had flawless timing he knew not many would side with him he didn't even had void at his side who is usually evil so he took the smarter approach by taking control of the three Olympians in their weakened states then as they recuperate they are the most powerful the weakest being Poseidon who is one of the big three and actually he is the strongest if the big three as his domain takes 3/4 of the planet I believe? Anyway still hestia is second and persues he is a primidorial of many domains and was only sucker punched and then knocked out by chaos cause chaos was taking it from behind the entire fight it may and he is the creator lord chaos like bruh?.. So obviously like in any other Percy is the second strongest being in existence but when mad he is stronger but definitely the second is already a very slim thread as chaos is two things the creator and the chaos those would be his main domains at least ones spoken of those fuel his power but on the other side Percy has many powerful domains and that adds up do basically either way he shits on Chaos either way if anything if Percy was paying attention he would have won and in any state chaos would have lost angry or not which means Percy is the strongest being existence and now the other string primidorial are gone in the void which I dont know why void can't bring them back as its his domain which may be something to add on
          
          
          

Keeping the story going

You're welcome

just wondering 

when will you post Olympians reunited?