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Read my new announcement please.
TheBlackMystery566
TheBlackMystery566
New story called Gravity Falls: Dipper dead and reborn
TheBlackMystery566
Hey everyone! I have a new story! Called "Gravity Falls: Dippers death" I'm still writing chapter 2 but chapter 2 is out! Enjoy
TheBlackMystery566
Guys I have a new story! It is called the BlackMystery's origin. The story is complete so get some snacks and read it!!!!!!!!!!! and share it to ur friends!!!!! thanks!
TheBlackMystery566
Guys I have a new story! It is called the BlackMystery's origin. The story is complete so get some snacks and read it!!!!!!!!!!! and share it to ur friends!!!!! thanks!
TheBlackMystery566
Guys I have a new story! It is called the BlackMystery's origin. The story is complete so get some snacks and read it!!!!!!!!!!! and share it to ur friends!!!!! thanks!
TheBlackMystery566
Guys I have a new story! It is called the BlackMyterys origin im still working on chapter 3 but the 2 Chapters are out. so get some popcorn and read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks for following me! ^-^
NOTdontcare
Thanks a lot for the follow! I hope you will enjoy what I write :-D
NOTdontcare
@TheBlackMystery566 so, at first you just have to work a little on your grammar. Don't make your sentences too long. Try to describe the characters more, for example: how the behave, what they like to do, how they speak etc. Write about the character's daily life. And most importantly, avoid jumping from one scene to another. Describe how the character came to an area, what he did there, and how he left. I can see that you are putting effort to your story. Just work a little harder, you will have an amazing story!
TheBlackMystery566
@NOTzroax thanks and yah im not gonna get offended because its natural u know what i mean?
TheBlackMystery566
@Haruka_Tsukiko1432 NO PROB