TheBlind_LightEnd

I've created a new story Bleach Fanfic Ideas and I really would love feedback, I've always wanted to do a Bleach fanfic, however, I never knew how to start or even make a Bleach story. Feedback on how the first chapter was will be amazing. Thank you all and stay safe.

TheBlind_LightEnd

I've created a new story Bleach Fanfic Ideas and I really would love feedback, I've always wanted to do a Bleach fanfic, however, I never knew how to start or even make a Bleach story. Feedback on how the first chapter was will be amazing. Thank you all and stay safe.

TheBlind_LightEnd

HELP!!!! @JoshJones798 and I are making a story together and we would like some advice for action scenes and others........ Please and thank you.

TheBlind_LightEnd

@sparkstrappedindark Thanks. This will help me try to make better scenes.
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SparksanJitterbugs

@TheBlind_LightEnd Well mine is pretty basic. I've read tips about how most fights are actually over fast and only last a few seconds (movies and Tv make them seem longer than they actually are) so if you're writing in first person, try focusing on quick attacks but emphasizing small details to make it seem longer.
            
            Like if Character A punches Character B, B is gonna feel the pain, the heat from the affected area, and several other things and emotions from there. But if B just barely dodges, they would feel the air push against their face from the force of the punch and have to quickly-- and possibly-- sloppily dodge the next punch and scramble back quickly to avoid the next couple punches coming from character A. Just as an example.
            
            I'm so sorry if that doesn't make sense!
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Megalover19

@TheBlind_LightEnd   oh?! Okay! Gotcha! So who's the scene with ive only watch up to season2 episode12...I saw that endeavors son went to visit his mom for the frist time in like I think he said 10 years
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TheBlind_LightEnd

I'm sorry for all the hold up, life is getting rough and I don't know what to do anymore.