Lidtoo
Hello! So I saw that you looked at my story! First one to do so as well! I liked your criticism and I didn't realize how short the chapter was until you commented XD. It's my first story and I didn't know how wattpad works so..... I think I'm going to take down chapter one and add more info to it since that's where you get to learn about the main characters. Thank you so much for your constructive criticism though! It was much needed.
