Haha thanks kriiztiidezii. I know there are some flaws but I am going to fix them all when I get the chance. I thank you for taking the time to read my fan fiction I've found that now I spend more time writing fan fictions than actual stories. I'm hurrying along with the update and typing as fast as I can. Hoping to get it done soon so have a look out for the new chapter, as for the editing help I will most definitely take it into consideration as I'm doing this by myself. Fan question?
What would be something awesome that could happen in the next update? What are you hoping to read or find out?