@TheBookWorm1004
I want to fix many things in 'the key to redemption'. Since I am currently working with another book, I won't publish any of the chapters I'm redoing but I will be working on it. Since it's my first book it has many grammatical errors and things I'd like to change. My priority will be Working on 'The Various Windows to life' but on the side I will be re-writing the chapters.
Quote from Chapter 17 "The Various Windows of Life" " I really want to move on. I don't want to be the person who's always sorry for themselves. I need some sort of motivation, maybe God can provide that." Check it out http://my.w.tt/UiNb/BvFU9lIC2D.
Quote from Chapter 16 of 'The Various Windows of Life' "His parents, that caught my attention. It hurt and left me curious. He begged me to take him and now he's sure his parents will pay for my hospital bill."
Check it out http://my.w.tt/UiNb/Jmm7bIi9ED.
Quote from the various Windows of life " ' You pushed me down harder every time I got up and even when I shook of my wounds it felt like you cut deeper!' " . Check it out! http://my.w.tt/UiNb/XHFa2W5CtD
Quote from chapter Eleven of "The Various Windows Of Life"
"I've fallen deep into self pity and I've come to realize that nothing but time is my enemy. Like this bible verses states, time is short. Do not waste time, for wasted time represents words and actions never spoken or acted upon."
http://my.w.tt/UiNb/d1JzYryaJC. Check it out!
Quote from chapter ten of "The Various Windows of Life". "One guy beat a strong man?" He asked with wide eyes.
"A man of God beat Goliath." I corrected." . http://my.w.tt/UiNb/XlKJUBRhhC. . Check it out!
Quote from chapter nine of "The Various Windows Of Life" "If you ever get lost you wait for me at this park" . http://my.w.tt/UiNb/HW44YFbWPB . Check it out!
Quote from chapter eight of "The Various Windows Of Life" I melted at his word and cooed internally at my baby. http://my.w.tt/UiNb/dZJ1JPIqrBm check it out.
Quote from chapter seven of "The Various Windows Of Life."
"We're her about your son, Elliot. He's run away from his home and we have reason to believe your hiding him or you know where he is" The women said." . http://my.w.tt/UiNb/0L0h8aBhhB . Check it out.
Quote from chapter six of "The Various Windows Of Life" . "Their voices were nearing me little by little. Until they were right in front of me. " . http://my.w.tt/UiNb/dtkjENIyfB . Check it out.