You know what really irks me? That every girl in a dark Harry fanfic is weak and vulnerable as hell. They apparently don't have the strength to fight back because they're so afraid. Not every girl is portrayed like that, minuscule and clueless. If I was that girl, I would bust my ass to escape and maybe give him some attitude, not obedience. For anyone who's writing a fanfic, make sure to over analyze the reality of how girls are. Not every female is made to be weak.