anjumsaed

Umm hey! I could love if you check out my new book. “the night I met” completed.
          
          The link :https://www.wattpad.com/story/272561612?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=anjumsaed&wp_originator=zCv2vdMKpN3Hlu6bPYAmXefC8IQg9ZGtQDvvdELNnP1%2FrPoh0CCQ8TchFZswi8Xre7tyZV7MTdGR3FybWH0hmSSBZI92j01abVX4z1cifnVHo35c3d3uD8u7lQsSnHH4

TheCoolerMiaK

Hello :)
            
            I checked out “The Night I Met”, and I think it definitely has potential! It’s short and to the point, which is definitely a strength, and I like how Sarah and Jennifer were characterized in their conversation. Though I would recommend finding someone to check over the writing; there are a fair few spelling/grammar errors. A bit of polishing goes a long way to making a story look better!
            
            Thanks for showing me, and best of luck <3
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