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TheCoolerMiaK

Hello :)
            
            I checked out “The Night I Met”, and I think it definitely has potential! It’s short and to the point, which is definitely a strength, and I like how Sarah and Jennifer were characterized in their conversation. Though I would recommend finding someone to check over the writing; there are a fair few spelling/grammar errors. A bit of polishing goes a long way to making a story look better!
            
            Thanks for showing me, and best of luck <3
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