@TheCurryPanda Not OTT per se, it was just a bit too big for computer reading. And yay I get a cookie!! Virtual hug for the cookie. And you can never try to hard the story is amazing and you can totally see the effort you put in, which is worth it. :L WellDone.
@LightOfTheTruth Congratz, you did it! Here's a virtual cookie! Thanks for the feedback on my story, I really appreciate it! Did I go OTT with the first paragraph? Oops. Soz I'm kinda new to this and I may have tried too hard...