hi, I just created a new story called Mi Querido right now. It is very short because I literally came over with the idea for in the plans today. it’ll probably take 10 minutes tops if that to read my first chapter if someone could just read it and comment things that like you feel like I should correct or just give me some feedback to see if they feel like the plot is good enough for me to continue and build a story off of it. Thank you.!