Well for All is Lost I like the fact that the doctor has two different 'personality' I like how you make the doctor have a good guy moment. Though the ending confused me, overall I like how you wrote your story. As for Nowhere to Hide I didn't really like how you summed it up as though it might have a dream, but I like the way you wrote and how all the 'cruel-ness' of both the story wasn't like muted... It makes no sense but yeah...