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@jazzlove124 omg thank god girl  lol i have summer school already yasss

@jazzlove124 
            
            Fine, fine <33 Thanks for asking. Sorry for late replies. School has been a bit of a pain.. but I'm planning on actually DOING stuff.

Haha! Noted! Great example by the way! The second one was spot on! 

Nico eyed Will, his eyes practically sparkling with love. The way his blonde hair glimmered in the air made him feel -
            
            No. That's definitely NOT Nico. That creation is an AUTHORS PERSPECTIVE of Nico. Would Nico actually do that in the books? No. But, here's what he would do.
            
            "Dork," he muttered, avoiding eye contact with the Son Of Apollo.
            
            Will smiled - why does he smile so much? - and just ruffled his hair in response.  Nico huffed and attempted to glare at Will. But he couldn't stop the light pink dust forming on his cheeks.
            
            Although I'm not perfect, I honestly think that my prompt is better than the first abomination..
            
            So, yeah, maintaining character is most important... This is sort of why I changed my name to "TheDiAngeloDiaries" It's because I learned that well...
            
            Readers don't care about what the author is writing.
            
            They care about the characters and the world you create.
            
            Well... Most readers anyway
            

Wow, I would've never thought someone would ask me for tips XD
            
            I think it's best for an author to get the main three traits of Nico in your head.
            
            Is he sarcastic? If so, when?
            
            And so on. You don't have to write that down, cuz that's just borin XD
            I also recommend pretending you are Nico. Shove all of YOUR thoughts and replace them with NICO.
            
            The author and Nico are two different things. The only thing that connects the two is the plot. 
            
            Here, Lettme me show you what I mean in the next reply

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