A Magical Mystery

hello i hope ur having a great day! could you check out my story fire eyes and give me your thought when u have the time? thanks! it's about this girl who is on the run for taking her son away from her cruel ex-husband. he hires someone to kill her, but thanks to strange floating fire spirits she finds a ruin deep in the forest where no one would find her, but upon exploring the place she comes face to face with a large fire creature that warns her to leave his territory...but without her son. now she must uncover a dark mystery about why the play is in ruin. as well as why the beast is so hostile and won't let her take her son with her. hope you'll like it

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          the thing I was talking about is www.Quotev.com and my user on there is www.Quotev.com/vegetation :-)

hi there! could you check out my story and give me your thoughts? I'd appriciate it! :)