starfighterDan655
I started to read your star trek story, and sofar I really enjoyed it. Its refreshing to see some people still appreciate Genes Works. But there are some mistakes that could be corrected, and I would love to humbly offer my advice
starfighterDan655
@ TheEmeraldCladdagh well i like your writing stvle so far very well, but there are some Things
1. Its spelled Vulcan
2. You should add more Characters sooner or later. Believe it or not. a Starfleet Ship is Small and every crew member matters In that family
3: The Ships Number is a bit to long. It would mean its beyond the 80.000th starship, in the Discovery Time they didn't build more then around max 1800 vk?
TheEmeraldCladdagh
Yeah that be great I need the honest opinions to know what to fix and what to improve because I’m terrible with my grammar so all the help is appreciated