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I see, well I'm glad you liked my rewrite and thank you so much for the advice you've given me. I'll be sure to think about it the next time I come up with something. Also I loved your new work for that Horizonshipping skit. I liked the first one better, but this one also emphasized how healing takes time and that's the case for Liko as she still feels the pain from what happened a year ago. Perhaps there'll be a moment when Liko yells at Roy and they get into a fight and then Liko will probably break down and cry and then Roy comforts her or something like that. Or what if she had a nightmare where Liko loses her friends, Roy especially just like how they lost Friede. And what would a confrontation with Spinel look like when Liko and Roy come face-to-face with him. IDK there's just ideas I just came up with from the top of my head, and maybe you could use them as well.
            
            Anyway thanks for your feedback and the advice you gave, and I'll be sure to keep that in mind and I hope you take care man, I'll see you around.

@Akil2308 tbh I don’t have any real notes about your rewrite, but I would recommend planning your stories out so you can explore your ideas to the best of your ability. I mean, I’ve literally spent all year planning my magnum opus, and I’m quite confident in the story I’m going to have written 
            
            I would also say that if you’re getting writers block, don’t be afraid to announce a hiatus. I did it recently for one of my stories, and I don’t think there is any shame in admitting you’re ready to move into something else, as long as it’s just that: a hiatus, not forever 
            
            And finally: all ideas are worth exploring. If you have an interesting story idea, you shouldn’t be afraid to develop it into something special. That’s how I role, and that’s a good way for you to roll too 
            
            Anyways that’s all I’ve got for now, tootles 

Remember that rewrite I created and I shared it with you? Do you what I could do to improve it so that more people would like it? Also, this is more of a one time thing for me as I don't have any other ideas on mind, but what advice would you give me or what should I do or remember whenever I come up new ideas or works in the future?

@ExazimZainudin Ah i see

Depends, does the status say “status: in relationship” or “status: pre-relationship”? 
            
            If “in relationship” then yes, if “pre-relationship” then no. Each skit is independent and therefore it varies 

It’s gonna be a bit, but I have a story coming up related to Helluva Boss