TheGDFProject

I am writing a new RWBY crossover story and I was wondering, is it ok to give Jaune diffrent coloured eyes to stay faithful to the crossover universe because I don't like the idea of using the colour Blue for this idea...
          	So what do you all think?

Knottymango43

@TheGDFProject I’d say go for it, the whole point of a fanfiction is to pretty much make your own unique story from the cannon story. Changes and tweaks to characters and their design is kind expected.
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RobertWalker506

@TheGDFProject I can agree, maybe have them green or brown maybe
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Sleep_deprivedGuy

@TheGDFProject it could work, or you could use the galaxy, stars, universe, or any space related stuff colors for his eyes, heck even sky blue is sufficient since you know, sky = space
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TheGDFProject

I am writing a new RWBY crossover story and I was wondering, is it ok to give Jaune diffrent coloured eyes to stay faithful to the crossover universe because I don't like the idea of using the colour Blue for this idea...
          So what do you all think?

Knottymango43

@TheGDFProject I’d say go for it, the whole point of a fanfiction is to pretty much make your own unique story from the cannon story. Changes and tweaks to characters and their design is kind expected.
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RobertWalker506

@TheGDFProject I can agree, maybe have them green or brown maybe
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Sleep_deprivedGuy

@TheGDFProject it could work, or you could use the galaxy, stars, universe, or any space related stuff colors for his eyes, heck even sky blue is sufficient since you know, sky = space
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TheGDFProject

If Jaune had a stand what would be his battle cry?
          I  don't want to be unoriginal and just have him say Ora, Dora, arri or Muda.
          I wanted to give Jaune a french one.
          How does Allo Sound? because it is short for Allons Y which means Let's go in french or would revo work as that is au revoir which is french for Goodbye.
          So what do you all think?

TravisDaway

@TheGDFProject it could work and it's not edgy.
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JoyBoy825

@TheGDFProject périr sounds about right for jaune that me personally
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Sleep_deprivedGuy

@TheGDFProject you could also use périr or mourir which means perish or die in french, but revo also sounds nice though me personally périr or mourir seems more fitting in battle context tho just saying
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TheGDFProject

I am currently writing an FGO story where Jaune get's sent to Chaldea before he joins beacon, would it be ok if I told how Jaune got their in a Synopsis? Because I really didn't like how I wrote the actual way.

KamenRiderGeatsIX

@TheGDFProject you gonna continue your static shock story ?
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Phantom117a

@TheGDFProject how about using Jaune's dreams/nightmares to tell the story?
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Sleep_deprivedGuy

@TheGDFProject and you could also make Jaune to accidentally gained First Magic: Denial of Nothingness due to the process of him being isekaied to the FGO and somehow ended up meeting Akasha, accidentally rizz it up, get kissed by it which ended up gained First Magic because of it, and then ended up in FGO world with the plot twist that Akasha is now somehow bonded up with Jaune and become some sort like Raphael from Tensura to Jaune
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