Hi! I'm working on a one shot book and you're really good so I was wondering if you could read it and critique me. (I'm sorry if I should've put this here but I'm not really good with technology so I don't know where I should put it).
@dorkygeekyandamazing I actually already read the first one and all I really have to say so far is when characters are talking make their quotes different paragraphs. like not "Blah blah" "blah blah" but like this
"Blah blah "
"Blah"